Improvements: November 21, 2006

I noticed that I have written many stories recently and I am asking for some feedback. I have posted many varieties of writing including 1st person and 3rd person, a long chapter story, a short chapter story, short stories, different perspectives on the same story, and a memoir. I am asking for simple answers to these questions…

What did you like?

What didn’t you like?

How can I improve?

What should I continue writing?

What story is your favorite so far?

What style of writing that I have tried do you like so far?

What style of writing should I work on more?

What should I try next?

Any other suggestions or comments?

Layout, Comments, & Prologue

Well, my layout is currently under construction, so right now it is ugly again. Everybody can comment now and I am going to try to make it where you can comment on my old, or somewhat like my old layout. I have a new prologue up! This is the prologue to my very long story, The Horse from the Woods. Tell me how you like it so far please! Also, tell me what I need to improve on. Most people say I should use less adjectives. What do you think?

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