The Horse From the Woods: Chapter 1 Part 3/4

Natalie grasped her horse’s neck tightly as she took in the horrific scene around her. Duchess became uneasy and broke free of her owner’s embrace to neigh loudly as she rose onto her back legs. She kicked her strong, front legs wildly as Natalie tried to regain control over her horse. Keeping her distance, she felt the fear within the atmosphere and could sense Duchess was troubled. She could see the deep fear within her sparkling blue eyes. “Duchess, what is it? What is it, girl?” she cried out reaching for the reigns that were whipping around wildly. Duchess quickly turned and bolted down the dirty, cobblestone path out of the destroyed village leaving Natalie to run after the mare. She was unable to keep up with Duchess’s incredible speed as she yelled out in despair with her arms outstretched, “Wait, Duchess! Come back! Where are you going? What is wrong?”

New Short Story & Blog Header

I have found out that I can not completely change my blog layout without destroying the whole thing, so for now I just have this awesome dragon header and 2 dragons on the sidebar, (one above search, and one below Meta.) Along with the dragons, I have nifty stars next to the title of each entry, a divider after each entry, and a little smiley face next to the “read more” statement. I have also witten the first part, probably of 3 or 4 parts of a short story called Lost in this World. Please read it and give me your thoughts on it and my new blog header!

Layout, Comments, & Prologue

Well, my layout is currently under construction, so right now it is ugly again. Everybody can comment now and I am going to try to make it where you can comment on my old, or somewhat like my old layout. I have a new prologue up! This is the prologue to my very long story, The Horse from the Woods. Tell me how you like it so far please! Also, tell me what I need to improve on. Most people say I should use less adjectives. What do you think?

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