I have drawn a nice picture of the foal from my story, The Horse From the Woods. This is the foal from the prologue, Duchess. Do you think that I describe her enough to get this picture in your mind? If not, please tell me how I could improve.
Already did give you pointers a while back.
Yes, thank you for reading a story. You don’t quite know what type of animal Shep is until Chapter 3
Same here…I have two white rabbits!
Thanks for the critique. How would you suggest I improve upon this essay to make it less superficial
This is very superficial and vague as you do identify some connection but lack the textual reference
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Layout, Comments, & Prologue
Oct 19
Posted by Noelle
Well, my layout is currently under construction, so right now it is ugly again. Everybody can comment now and I am going to try to make it where you can comment on my old, or somewhat like my old layout. I have a new prologue up! This is the prologue to my very long story, The Horse from the Woods. Tell me how you like it so far please! Also, tell me what I need to improve on. Most people say I should use less adjectives. What do you think?
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